Chords in the beginning are nice. I think some reverb on the pluck/harp would be cool. Raise drums in the mix by 3-5 db, or lower melodies by that amount. Bassy chords are taking up a bit too much space. I think some sidechain would also help the drums stick out more but you won't necessarily want that. I think some hats, tambourines or shakers or something like that would help as the drums come in. Not bad at all

Hmm, nice minimal intro. I would add a little reverb to the hat to add to the atmosphere. When you have the 808 kick hit mulitple times shorten change the release so that the bass is not overlapping and distorting. Ride is like 4 db too loud, and the hard panning to the right is disorienting. Generally turn up drums and turn down melodies. I like the idea and the melodies, mainly what you need to work on is mixing. Solid beginning!